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Amusing verses that shine a light on mostly medical and grammatical topics

​When proofreading with an eye to perfection, there really is no substitute for good research. While one is always guided by the client's stated preferences regarding style, there is also a baseline understanding that serves as the foundation against which required differences are compared.

I will be offering some home-grown verses here that may be helpful for keeping certain basics in mind while adapting to the guidelines of a specific project, whether under the umbrella of CMOS, AP, APA, MLA, or other guidance.

They are not intended to be comprehensive regarding any particular issue. Rather, the purpose is to draw attention to identifiable aspects that are worth noting and make them memorable.

I think of these verses tongue in cheek as "Grammar Grist." Others that you find here will be more along the lines of "Medical Musings"; some might even qualify as a combination of the two.

It'll be fun. So, let's do it. Share the cheer everywhere.


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(A proofreader's note regarding “then”)


Since “later,” “after,’ “then,” and “next”

Are one-word adverbs of time, 

Like “subsequently,” “afterward,”

They live by rules sublime.


Conjunctive adverbs joining thoughts

Expressed as clauses, more,

Must bow with every entrance made,

Give clue to function sure.


The comma brought along is clue

Of clause-wide role ahead,

To modify the thought to come

While linking that which led.


A sentence here may illustrate

This role so commonly seen: 

“We'll have to let the fruit get ripe;

Indeed, it's still too green.”


But “then” is special like its peers,

The one-word temporal ones:

“They pranced and danced and lost their pants;

Then all fell down at once.”


Among conjunctive adverbs all,

These words when functioning thus

Do not require the comma's arm,

But strut with status plus.


The regular adverbs similar are,

For different reason though:

No comma cometh in between

Such adverb and its bro'.



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