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Amusing verses that shine a light on mostly medical and grammatical topics

​When proofreading with an eye to perfection, there really is no substitute for good research. While one is always guided by the client's stated preferences regarding style, there is also a baseline understanding that serves as the foundation against which required differences are compared.

I will be offering some home-grown verses here that may be helpful for keeping certain basics in mind while adapting to the guidelines of a specific project, whether under the umbrella of CMOS, AP, APA, MLA, or other guidance.

They are not intended to be comprehensive regarding any particular issue. Rather, the purpose is to draw attention to identifiable aspects that are worth noting and make them memorable.

I think of these verses tongue in cheek as "Grammar Grist." Others that you find here will be more along the lines of "Medical Musings"; some might even qualify as a combination of the two.

It'll be fun. So, let's do it. Share the cheer everywhere.


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​(A proofreader's note regarding “relay” and “relate”)

Like “relay,” the race, all “relays” transfer;
From one to another a signal they send;
For even the hounds in exchange and refresh--
A getting and passing-on ever they lend.

When speaking of “relay” we sometimes intend
The laying of items like emphasis placed
On syllables favored in words like “relay
That otherwise leave us all flustered and crazed.

With emphasis second, this latter is verb,
Though sometimes the same will its strength put on first.
To “receive and then pass along” core to its act,
“Relay” adds precision; “relate” does it nurse.
 
“Relate” is a telling, no transfer implied,
Without a relationship tied to its hide.
But with understanding, connection twixt two,
“Relate” is then given more meanings to ride.

“To relay the pavers, her spouse made a date,
Accepting that 're-lie' no stones would obey.
Their fate she would guess and their story relate
While waiting for word from her mate to relay.”