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    AN APPLE A DAY

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    An apple a day keeps doctor away,

    A chant in aid of health,
    May scare and steer a tot or two
    To value nutrient wealth.
     
    An onion a day and none will stay,
    A contrary child did think;
    And so, today, curmudgeon Ray
    Doth eat to make a stink.

    Get garlic lei, keep devil at bay,
    More tentative ones would say;
    Not so for Ray who'd rather pay 
    For all to stay away.


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    ALTHOUGH/EVEN THOUGH

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    The subordinating conjunction “though” (and its formal cousin “although”) can be a bit tricky for writers. 

    Although there is some disagreement, when a dependent clause (such as the preceding) occurs at the start of a sentence, a comma separates it from the independent clause that follows. 

    The uncertainty arises when that same dependent clause appears later in the sentence, possibly in the middle or at the end. Introduced by a subordinating conjunction rather than a coordinating conjunction such as “and,” which would require a comma, this dependent clause may or may not strictly call for one.

    Most authorities seem to think that it should reflect the level of contrast that is intended, i.e., to what extent can the second part be seen as negative while the first is positive or vice versa. For those who allow that a comma may be appropriate, it is the strength of this contrast that seems to determine whether such punctuation applies.


    “Although” and “even though” do both
    Subordinate and join
    Contrasting thoughts to main idea;
    For strength of difference, coin.

    With comma taken in exchange,
    “Though” tells of contrast great,
    While “even though” will oft not work
    Unless emphatic state.

    But then a comma it demands,
    Such labor never free;
    Akin to “though,” and like “although,” 
    Much contrast is the key.

    Expect a subject and a verb
    In construct coming next:
    “The message shared was deep and true,
    Although ‘twas brief in text.”

    Across no contrast or just mild,
    A payment is withheld:
    “She likes an ice-cream sandwich soft
    Although it tends to melt.”

    No comma there was warranted,
    But look at this instead:
     “Outside it's snowing, even though
    The day is bright, sun fed.” 

    Since “even though” inherently
    Emphatic contrast brings,
    It rates a comma usually,
    Regardless what it sings.
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    JUST…

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    The word this week is “just.”


    Though born as righteous, morally upright,
    A contrary course its life hath gone.
    “Precisely,”  “exactly,” new meanings that came,
    Decayed with age; no longer were strong.

    Unjust it was, this life of “just,”
    To “almost exactly,” diminished and sad.
    “With tiny-bit difference, enough yet to note,”
    And now on to “barely” and “merely,” a fad.

    Examples here: “She's just turned twelve,”
    And “Give me just a little bit more.”
    “I'm just a regular Joe, you know.”
    “She wants him just as friend, no more.”

    So adjective, adverb, whatever the role,
    As frequent pal this “just” will serve.
    No goal ahead to wed or to bed,
    Instead a glory remembered, preferred.

    Perhaps, one day “just so” and “fair”
    Will make a resurgence, such usage now rare;
    If only reminding of change not to care
    Or granting the wish that true “justice” may bear.

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    THE WIDTH OF WITH

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    ​Here's a simple word that has several different meanings depending on context. For those of us who like to write, it's a relief knowing that the rules for accompanying commas are not nearly as numerous!


    With meanings multitudinous,
    It stars in many spheres;
    Yet humble is this tiny word
    That's known as “with” to peers.

    It merely serves in front of nouns,
    A link for items prior,
    While in this prepositional role,
    Conspiring to inspire.

    It fills with awe all those who see
    The subtly varied sense
    Conveyed in ways for granted took
    Regardless of one's lens.

    At times it says “in company of,”
    Or “as a complement to,”
    Or “using,” “given,” like “despite,”
    And “of ingredient,” too.

    Then “in possession of” no less
    Than “in the manner of”
    Along with “an associate of”
    Are synonyms enough.

    “He walks with Liz, who smiles with glee
    And sprightly with new shoes.
    They go well with her frock, you see,
    While made with silk in twos.

    For those who write with pen and ink
    And think of comma's place
    (Perhaps a tutor still with school,
    Who stands with book at grace),
     
    It's known that “with” no comma takes
    Unless in rare estate,
    At sentence mid or near the end 
    For nonessential fate.”

    Let's toast this word so versatile,
    Though yet in letters short.
    Let's drink to speech unlimited,
    With nary a drunken snort.


    *The key:
    He walks with Liz… (“in company of”)
    Who smiles with glee… (“in the manner of”)
    And sprightly with new shoes… (“in possession of”)
    They go well with her frock… (“as a complement to”)
    While made with silk… (“of ingredient”)
    For those who write with pen and ink… (“using”)
    Perhaps a tutor still with school… (“an associate of”)
    Who stands with book… (“in possession of”)
    ​With meanings multitudinous… ("given")
    With nary a drunken snort… (nonessential phrase at end of sentence; separated by a comma)
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    HYDROGEN PEROXIDE

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    Through ages of injuries an agent
    For cleaning out wounds revered
    Was hydrogen peroxide resplendent
    To many a parent concerned.

    Remember how quick they applied it
    When as a child you were hurt;
    For owies and cuts, lacerations, 
    A fizzing and stinging occurred.

    New knowledge now of peroxide,
    Serves warning but not good cheer.
    Informing of action that inside
    Doth kill more than it should dare.

    Like “antibiots” for bacteria,
    Destroying the bad and the good,
    Peroxide of hydrogen is terror,
    Through wanton destruction in ‘hood.

    No doubt its cleansing prowess;
    But cells beginning repair,
    Like others we know as infectious,
    Are crippled beyond compare.

    Be careful of hydrogen peroxide;
    It's not a friend of wounds.
    Its action is indiscriminate;
    No cells are left in tune.
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    RATHER…

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    The word rather is common in everyday situations, having several meanings and applications that native English speakers take for granted. In writing, however, using rather causes some concern because of uncertainty regarding the placement of associated commas. The main thing to remember is that “rather” almost never takes a comma, but when it does, the comma is most often one of a pair that serves to set something apart and make it nonessential (hence, parenthetical) to the core meaning of the sentence. Finding rather attached to a single comma is rather rare.  

    When rather's not essential,
    Two commas separate it;
    And comma unilateral
    Is never there permitted.

    It's parenthetically
    Diverting us with data
    That's not required really,
    A smoothish operator.

    One doesn't wish to linger
    But, rather, keep on going.
    The time to rest is yonder
    When past the area daring.”

    A single comma seldom
    With safety is abounding,
    And “rather” feels more winsome 
    With commas—two—attending.

    So, “rather,” almost certain,
    Eschews a single comma,
    Unless conjunctive curtain
    It hangs before the comma.

    In being conjunctive adverb, 
    Connective function serving,
    It joins two parts that contrast
    Across a stop or such thing;

    A semicolon often,
    The bridge for many takers,
    To “rather” then will shunt them,
    Suggesting comma spacer.

    Let's not hold on to doubting
    Forever; rather, let us 
    Advance with faith, asserting
    That grace removes all onus.

    But when a simple adverb,
    With meaning only “fairly,”
    Or when it tells of preference,
    Degree, or if exactly,

    Or “rather than“ in complex
    (With words between or after),
    No comma leads and ushers
    That “rather” in its barter.

    I'd rather peel an apple
    Than juice a yellow lemon;
    Get flavor rather subtle,
    Not rather tempt a demon.”