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Amusing verses that shine a light on mostly medical and grammatical topics

​When proofreading with an eye to perfection, there really is no substitute for good research. While one is always guided by the client's stated preferences regarding style, there is also a baseline understanding that serves as the foundation against which required differences are compared.

I will be offering some home-grown verses here that may be helpful for keeping certain basics in mind while adapting to the guidelines of a specific project, whether under the umbrella of CMOS, AP, APA, MLA, or other guidance.

They are not intended to be comprehensive regarding any particular issue. Rather, the purpose is to draw attention to identifiable aspects that are worth noting and make them memorable.

I think of these verses tongue in cheek as "Grammar Grist." Others that you find here will be more along the lines of "Medical Musings"; some might even qualify as a combination of the two.

It'll be fun. So, let's do it. Share the cheer everywhere.


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(A proofreader's note regarding “luxurious” and “luxuriant”)

“Luxurious,” “luxuriant” share ancestry in “luxus,”
Thus “luxury,” extravagant “excess.”
Dissimilar they are in that latter word listed, 
With differences there to address.

Abundance in excess beyond expectations,
Or needs that are normally had,
Were painted out first in the former descriptor;
“Luxuriant” came later—a tad.

“Luxurious” by meaning “related to luxury”
Depicts also “comfort and ease”;
And “showing a love of such pleasures of luxury”
Is likewise a sense, if you please.

“Of finest and richest kind,” also another,
Bestows more of breadth to its brush.
The area of focus is opulence mainly,
With excess there favored as plush.

“Luxuriant,” in contrast, on “growth” has its focus,
Much less on the trappings of wealth;
Abundance of things in their flourishing nature,
Displaying an excess of health.

“His hair was described as luxuriant and glossy--
Abundantly growing, such flair.
Luxurious the living he quickly envisioned;
A pity the hair was from mare.”
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​(A proofreader's note regarding “inoculate” and “inculcate”)

“Inoculate” and “inculcate” are tantalizing lookers,
Displaying most letters as shared.
As actors apparent, their meanings will differ,
With only one likeness there dared.

Both verbs in their actions portray an “implanting”;
A likeness would then not surprise.
For “inculcate” skillful, the mind is the target,
Which limits the way it applies.

At first, “to inoculate” meant grafting in planting,
A bud (or “eye”--oculus) moved;
“To introduce an item right into another”;
This meaning at core was thus grooved.

When items delivered were immunologically active,
The sense of “protecting” arose;
To foster resistance by sending foes weakened,
Or strengthen a metal by dose.

Thus several the targets “inoculate” delights in; 
Another one clearly the mind.
Since “inculcate” teaches with mental impressions,
“Inoculate” is like it by kind.

“‘A teacher must inculcate, repeating instructions,’
The leader was heard to proclaim.
He wished with his words to inoculate even
The ones who avoided his fame.”

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(A proofreader's note regarding “adverse” and “averse”)

“Adverse” and “averse,” although visually similar
Apart from a “d” to divide,
As adjectives serve that are strikingly different
While sharing “against” as their guide.

“Adverse” in its meanings of “acting against one,” 
“Unfavorable,” “hostile,” and “bad,”
Describes mostly things that are truly external,
Not feelings internal we've had.

In contrast, “averse” has a focus that's personal,
Relating a state more than angst--
“Disliking, “opposed,” and “unwilling,” “reluctant,”
Descriptors of feeling against.

“Averse” is distinguished as different in usage
 When “to” is seen tacked on as tail.
A noun may precede it to herald its coming,
As other words also unveil.

When choosing between the two words of our study,
“Aversion” may serve as a key:
If thinking “averse” is then linked to “aversion,”
Reminder of “feeling” comes free.

“The hiker retreated, 'averse to' rock climbing,
But claimed he was not 'risk averse.'
'Averse' was his partner though hiding her feelings,
Contending that naught was 'adverse.'”

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(A proofreader's note regarding “certainty” and “certitude”)

Since “certainty” and “certitude” are centered on “certain,”
Let's see what its meanings would find:
“Dependable,” “settled,” “inevitable,” “fail-safe,”
“Assured well in action or mind.”

When “certainty” postures as “something that's certain,”
These adjectives stand there on hand.
Elsewhere as its role is “the state of being certain,”
A part that's more mental and grand.

This “absolute conviction” as meaning of “certainty”
Arises for “certitude” as well,
Synonymous with “certainty” across the full gamut
Except as one's attitude might tell.

For “certitude” is favored when point of view mental
Relates to beliefs more than facts;
This “freedom from doubting” is taken as valid
Though some may consider it lax.

“Emboldening his comment was constancy of friendship,
A 'certainty' of numerous years.
He said that her stance was of 'certitude' surely
And saw that she still had no fears.”

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(A proofreader's note regarding “discomfort” and “discomfit”)

“Discomfort,” “discomfit,” the words of our study,
Though sharing their starting two-thirds,
Have different origins and meanings distinctive,
And one sense in common for nerds.

“Discomfit” came first as a verb that was special;
Misuse as “discomfort” was next.
And given “unease” at the core of the latter,
This sense of “discomfit” was blest.

But rooted in meaning “undo and completely,”
“Discomfit” is much more intense;
To “thwart” or “frustrate” and “perplex” or “embarrass”--
These verbs with “discomfit” are friends.

And thus as a verb our “discomfit” will function
In most of its cases and clues.
Though subtly alluring the same-sounding noun,
“Discomfiture” is favored in use.

“Discomfort,” in contrast, as noun is most offered,
The other form less often found;
A “state of uneasiness, mental or physical,”
Its meaning is simple and sound.

“'Discomfit' the word was the teacher's new topic;
Its focus more mental, her theme.
The slides on the screen with a view to 'discomfit'
Were planned to elicit a scream.”

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(A proofreader's note regarding “regimen” and “regiment”)

Words “regimen” and “regiment” as nouns coexist,
The “t” of the latter forever distinct.
Their meanings are different, but “regiment” as verb
May hint a sure closeness and show the nouns linked.

For “regiment” in action a system will bring
And “organize rigidly” with order as end;
“Assigning to a regiment” or setting one up,
“A military unit” it sometimes will lend.

And thus we have “regiment,” a “military clutch,”
And “regimen” proper, its soundalike near.
Of “plan systematic” this “regimen” will tell,
With meanings in governance and elsewhere less dear.

“Regime” much more likely of “government” will speak,
Of “government in power” or “period of rule.”
Though many of its senses with “regimen” do match,
The management areas get most of the fuel.

“The concept of order in ‘regiment' the verb 
Is echoed quite subtly in nouns like 'regime.'
With ‘plan systematic' and 'government real,'
There's order in 'regimen,' a thing we esteem.”

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PRECEDENTS/PRECEDENCE
(A proofreader's note regarding “precedents” and “precedence”)

The plural noun “precedents” comes from “precede”
To “precedence” mimic though clearly distinct.
While “presidents” and “presidency” nimbly abide,
Our words of the day here are sometimes unlinked.

For “precedents” are things that “preceded” in time;
As “similar actions,” they “happened before”;
Creating “examples,” progressing to “rules,”
Becoming “the usual”—such ends, maybe more.

But “earlier occurrence” is seen as apart,
That quality selfsame deserving of name.
To take up the mantle is “precedence” near,
Not limited to time as the terms of its game.

With “precedence,” often “priority” is theme
In terms of arrangement, importance, or rank;
It still honors time, a considerable thing,
And caters to ceremony—all of that swank.

“He cited six 'precedents' bolstering his case.”
“To now break with 'precedent,' the voters would hate.”
“Your safety takes 'precedence' as always on base.”
“Her 'precedence' as Duchess was faultless to date.”

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DELIQUESCE/ACQUIESCE 
(A proofreader's note regarding “deliquesce” and “acquiesce”)

By “deliquesce” and “acquiesce”
A suffix twixt is shared,
The e-s-c-e sameness there
To introduce what's aired.

This ending meaning “to become”
Doth paint ahead a goal;
In “deliquesce,” it's “liquid,” yes;
The other, “quiet” soul.

Thus “acquiesce,” quiescent-sort,
Of “quiet acceptance” tells,
A loath compliance without fuss
Oft featured in its spells.

“Become dissolved” to fluid state
Is “deliquesce” at heart;
To waste away or be destroyed;
To slowly fall apart.

“The contents of the saucer blest
Were left to deliquesce;
She felt she had to acquiesce
Despite the chance of mess.”

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(A proofreader's note regarding “practical” and “practicable”)

Since “practical” and “practicable” are practically alike,
Partaking with “practice” an origin shared,
At core in their meanings are actions and deeds;
“Ability” therein they both have ensnared.

While “practical” will qualify with “actual” or “real,”
Contrasting “theoretical” as largely its deal,
It also has “able to be put into use”
As one of its meanings that others may steal.

The culprit in chief is our “practicable” word,
With “feasible” and “usable” to limit its sense.
As noun or to persons it never will serve,
Not being, like “practical,” surrounded by friends;

For “practical” yet may “exam” give a name
And signify “virtual” or “engaged with the act.”
Including these meanings and “practicable” too,
Makes “practical” broader—and safer, in fact.

“As legal professional of scholarly repute,
He cut out the word that his client found cute;
For 'practical,' yes, there were reasons to root;
The 'practicable' label, though, never would suit.”

“Advising his clients to 'practicable' eschew,
The legal environment requiring its due,
He steered them to 'practical,' pointed and true,
Avoiding the pitfalls that else would ensue.”