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Amusing verses that shine a light on mostly medical and grammatical topics

​When proofreading with an eye to perfection, there really is no substitute for good research. While one is always guided by the client's stated preferences regarding style, there is also a baseline understanding that serves as the foundation against which required differences are compared.

I will be offering some home-grown verses here that may be helpful for keeping certain basics in mind while adapting to the guidelines of a specific project, whether under the umbrella of CMOS, AP, APA, MLA, or other guidance.

They are not intended to be comprehensive regarding any particular issue. Rather, the purpose is to draw attention to identifiable aspects that are worth noting and make them memorable.

I think of these verses tongue in cheek as "Grammar Grist." Others that you find here will be more along the lines of "Medical Musings"; some might even qualify as a combination of the two.

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(A proofreader's note regarding “who” and “whom”)


Words “who” and “whom” are pronouns both

That dress alike apart from hem.

Yet clothing fails to tell us who

Hath right of place when phrases aim.


One serves as subject, acting out,

The other, object—acted on.

Think “who” might shout and dash about

Regardless “whom” imposed upon.


To know if subject pronoun is,

Try “he” or “she” to substitute.

Its nature true may object be

If “him” or “her” doth  better suit.


Thus relative pronouns “who” and “whom”

As subject/object serve in clauses.

Sometimes a clause itself is subject;

Analysis then is cause for pauses.


But “whom” is choice for after “to,”

As is with prepositions most,

Which lead to object in the phrase

And hold that role to baldly boast.


Though language changes over time

And fashion cycles ever more,

The hem of “whom” remains the same,

While “who” advances to the fore.


“The man who came was one with whom

Most girls would flirt and, maybe, swoon.

And, yet, there were a few for whom

The day could never end too soon.”