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Amusing verses that shine a light on mostly medical and grammatical topics

​When proofreading with an eye to perfection, there really is no substitute for good research. While one is always guided by the client's stated preferences regarding style, there is also a baseline understanding that serves as the foundation against which required differences are compared.

I will be offering some home-grown verses here that may be helpful for keeping certain basics in mind while adapting to the guidelines of a specific project, whether under the umbrella of CMOS, AP, APA, MLA, or other guidance.

They are not intended to be comprehensive regarding any particular issue. Rather, the purpose is to draw attention to identifiable aspects that are worth noting and make them memorable.

I think of these verses tongue in cheek as "Grammar Grist." Others that you find here will be more along the lines of "Medical Musings"; some might even qualify as a combination of the two.

It'll be fun. So, let's do it. Share the cheer everywhere.


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(A proofreader's note about “immigrate” and “emigrate”)

In “immigrate” and “emigrate,”
Migrate is given theme,
With people moving place to place,
Their eyes agleam with dream.

All immigrants and emigrants
Are moving in or out;
They in-migrate and out-migrate;
Perspective it's about.

Thus “emigrate from” is the norm
When saying “emigrate,”
With “immigrate to” much preferred
If latter reference made.

The “e” so sharp in “exit” then
Is key to keeping straight;
When “leaving from,” not “coming in,”
Make “emigrate” your date.

“They emigrated from their homes,
Bright emigrants with hope;
On shore they stood as 'immigrants,'
As seen from native scope.”

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​(A proofreader's note about “ingenious” and “ingenuous”)

“Ingenious,” “ingenuous” would seem to be twins,
Alike in each feature except at the hinge;
It’s only at “i” and conversely at “u”
They manage disjoining and fail to impinge.

They both have origins relating to birth,
But meanings divergent make different their ways.
“Ingenious” at times will “inventiveness” claim;
“Ingenuous,” alas, may “naivety” grace.

Remembering the difference is simple by sound;
“Ingenious” when spoken will “genius” emit.
“Ingenuous” instead may of “genuine” remind,
A dose of the “candid” and “guileless” to wit.

“Our Jeanie and Jenny were partners alone,
With 'Jeanie Ingenious' as jack-of-all-trades;
And if a new prospect was spiky on phone,
Then 'Jenny Ingenuous' was calming in spades.”

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(A proofreader's note about “ordinance” and “ordnance”)

With “put in order” at its base, 
Word “ordinance” arose:
Decree or practice, law, or fate,
Provisions for martial blows.

The regimented life of troops,
All ready and precise,
Would clip the word and “ordnance” make,
Thus cut and trim to rights.

The taller word here “ordinance”
Produced the shorter child.
Decreed it was through natural speech,
The “i” let go as wild.

Hence “ordnance” from “ordinance”
For military tools was birthed;
In vivo not in vitro made,
With “in” a clue unearthed.

“By ordinance, each village trained
With ordnance on hand.
The natives claimed it preordained,
From gods an order grand.”

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(A proofreader's note about “forbidding” and “forbidden”)

“Forbidding” and “forbidden” share a parent in “forbid,”
From whom they take the notion of commanding as they go;
“Forbid” will mean to hinder or to order strong against,
Command delivered actually or as the end would show.
 
Synonymous with “outlaw” and “prohibit” and “enjoin”
And likewise unto “interdict” or “block” or “ban” to boot,
“Forbid” can take the meaning of such orders in effect,
Its taller children given thus  more senses at their root.

So think then of “forbidding” as just “tending to forbid,”
Inclusive though of “menacing” and “threatening” and “grim.”
“Forbidden,” the descriptor of the object of “forbid,”
Identifies the item there commanded as too dim.

“Free climbing on the tower was forbidden by the school,
But Alex and his pals believed surmounting would be cool.
The route was not forbidding but the goal an envied jewel
Since 'master the forbidden' was for them a special rule.”