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Amusing verses that shine a light on mostly medical and grammatical topics

​When proofreading with an eye to perfection, there really is no substitute for good research. While one is always guided by the client's stated preferences regarding style, there is also a baseline understanding that serves as the foundation against which required differences are compared.

I will be offering some home-grown verses here that may be helpful for keeping certain basics in mind while adapting to the guidelines of a specific project, whether under the umbrella of CMOS, AP, APA, MLA, or other guidance.

They are not intended to be comprehensive regarding any particular issue. Rather, the purpose is to draw attention to identifiable aspects that are worth noting and make them memorable.

I think of these verses tongue in cheek as "Grammar Grist." Others that you find here will be more along the lines of "Medical Musings"; some might even qualify as a combination of the two.

It'll be fun. So, let's do it. Share the cheer everywhere.


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​(A proofreader's note regarding “tack” and “tact”)

A multipurpose noun is “tack”
In nags and nails and sails,
Referring there with meanings clear
Like "course" per more details.

A verb as well is our friend "tack,"
To prove his worth and act,
Impressive more than all-trade Jack,
And caring not for tact.

For only nouns may "tact" address,
Itself a case of one.
"Avoid offense" its mantra strong,
The prize for calm thus won.

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​(A proofreader's note regarding “loath” and “loathe”)

Though “loath” and “loathe” may sound the same,
When played, their meanings part,
For one will serve as adjective,
The other, verb at heart.

While “loath” describes reluctance mere,
The “e” of “loathe” extends
Its meaning to extremity:
“To feel dislike intense.”

When “loath” and “loathe” for share appear,
Decipher whether verb;
The latter word may then be clear
Or hint at room for curb.

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(A proofreader's note regarding “deprived” and “depraved”)

“Deprived” implies a serious absence
Of basics deemed essential,
A taking away of something maybe,
With “lack” a factor crucial.

“Depraved” instead must say “corrupted”
In morals and ethical conduct.
The lack we find there illustrated
Is sickly sought—not out-chucked.

“Deprived of any moral compass,
The youth was disadvantaged,
Exemplifying depraved behavior,
His inclinations wretched.”

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(A proofreader's note regarding “emergent” and “urgent”)

Beware the sound of “urgent”
That echoes in “emergent”;
Emergency there hinted
Perverts what was intended.

“Emergent” means beginning,
A coming into being.
In medicine, it's different,
“Emergency” inferring.

These both can be descriptors,
As adjectives like “urgent”:
“Emergency condition,”
“Emergent social segment.”

Single, though, is “urgent”
In meaning and in purpose,
Requiring prompt attention
Its one and only focus.