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Amusing verses that shine a light on mostly medical and grammatical topics

​When proofreading with an eye to perfection, there really is no substitute for good research. While one is always guided by the client's stated preferences regarding style, there is also a baseline understanding that serves as the foundation against which required differences are compared.

I will be offering some home-grown verses here that may be helpful for keeping certain basics in mind while adapting to the guidelines of a specific project, whether under the umbrella of CMOS, AP, APA, MLA, or other guidance.

They are not intended to be comprehensive regarding any particular issue. Rather, the purpose is to draw attention to identifiable aspects that are worth noting and make them memorable.

I think of these verses tongue in cheek as "Grammar Grist." Others that you find here will be more along the lines of "Medical Musings"; some might even qualify as a combination of the two.

It'll be fun. So, let's do it. Share the cheer everywhere.


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(A proofreader's note regarding “climatic” and “climactic”)

Both “climax” and “climate” can take on a suffix;
Most often they partner with “ic.”
By adding its meaning, “pertaining to something,”
We then have two words that may trick.

On one hand “climactic,” the other “climatic,”
Their shticks have a similar click;
And yet what they speak of is so very different,
It gives us a laugh and a kick.

When thinking “climactic,” remember the “-c-t”
Is standing in place of an “x.”
It might have been truly “climaxic” if proper;
Perhaps “x” was seen as a hex!

Considering “max” is a handy mnemonic
When one puts “climactic” to use
As “forming a climax” or “climax-related,”
Its meaning for all who would muse.

“Climatic” will likewise as adjective function,
With “climate” instead as the key.
“Relating to climate” and “influenced by climate”
Are senses we commonly see.

Climatic conditions conspired against them
When starting the climactic race;
But managing yet a climactic performance,
They finished at pace in first place”
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(A proofreader's note regarding “peaceful” and “peaceable”)

Words “peaceful” and “peaceable” (“peace” as a parent)
So clearly are set “to agree”
Since “peace” is “a state of tranquility or quiet,”
Of conflict or violence most free.

So “free of disorder or strife or contention”
Are meanings that one would expect,
But suffixes “able” and “ful” in their senses
Add subtleties we must respect.

With “ful” as the suffix comes “full of”/“resembling”
In special relation to peace;
Thus, equally “empty of strife or contention”
Is “peaceful” when standing at ease.

Occasionally, though, it will posture as “peaceable”
And offer a broader allure. 
Its meaning “relating to peace as condition”
Is also extension for sure.

The “capable” given by “able” as suffix
Hands “peaceable” a meaning distinct:
“Disposed toward peace and there unto inclining.”
So mainly to people it’s linked.

This sense of being active, important distinction,
Distinguishes “peaceable” in use,
For “peaceful” has focus on things that are static,
No agency there to set loose.

“It pictures a scene that is 'calm' and quite 'tranquil,'
So this one is peaceful, indeed.
Our peaceable artists have lauded it perfect;
It echoes their peaceable creed.”

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(A proofreader's note regarding “enervate” and “innervate”)

Innervate and enervate, rooted in Latin,
Share nervus as venerated one.
With “nerve” as a meaning, like “sinew” and “tendon,”
It spoke of the “strong” and not wan.

Its offspring though similar in general appearance
Do differ in meaning and sound;
The “en” as with “end” and the “in” like “instill” 
Put a contrast in emphases found.

Here, prefixes Latin distinguish the meanings
Of these verbs of energy and force;
The “en” seen in “enervate” offers us “out of”
To tell of a purpose, of course.

Thus “enervate” came from a verb that enacted
“Removal of sinew to weaken”:
“To lessen the strength or vitality of” something,
Including the mental as stricken.

With emphasis given to syllable second,
“Innervate” doth mean “to supply
With nerves” or “to fire up by impulses various,”
“To energize” truly or nigh.

“She said the descriptor 'enervate' was different:
'It enervates “en”—and with grace.'
If only this insight would serve to innervate,
The team its first win might embrace.”

“'Innervate' may sound like word 'inner' in starting
For those who don't enervate 'in.'
Enjoying this option innervates some people,
Though others may think it a sin.”

“The cross-country race was their way to test stamina
And enervate all but the fit.
The band would be there to innervate the winner,
Reducing the chance of a sit.”




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(A proofreader's note regarding “amiable” and “amicable”)

When Amy and Abel join hands at their table,
Then “amiable” may be perceived.
The soft-landing sounds of the “ami” and “able”
With feelings of love are received;

For “amiable” stands on its Latin origin
Of “lover” or “personal friend.”
Its meanings as “friendly” and “generally agreeable”
Do mainly to persons attend.

Exceptions, though rare, are both fair and accepted
Since traits of personality and more
Described yet as “having a quality that pleases”
Are “amiable” things to the core.

Though similar in origin, our “amicable” is different
With “friendly goodwill” at its heart.
The “c” in the center reminds one of “contracts,”
Where “amicable” long had its start.

Describing agreements, relations, and attitudes,
It caters to things but not people;
Expressing “characterized by a friendly goodwill,” 
With an emphasis clearly on “peaceable.”

“They worked laying cable, both Hammy and Abel,
And amicable were their disputes.
They ended their toiling with amiable smiling,
Still glad to be not wearing suits.”